At 1.1%, almost everyone who reads your product pages leaves anyway. I'd start with the page that gets the most traffic, not the one you like least.
Why it worksNames their exact number back to them, then shows judgment.
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I don't think the copy is the whole problem. At 1.1% it's usually the first screen above the price — I'd fix that before touching the other eleven pages.
Why it worksMild disagreement signals expertise; most applicants just agree.
Below are two ecommerce pages I rewrote, before and after, side by side — so you can judge the approach on pages like yours, not on my say-so.
Why it worksLets the work argue for you instead of adjectives.
There's one line missing from most refillable product pages, and it's probably the one costing you the most sales. I'll point to it on your first page.
Why it worksOpens a loop only a reply can close.
Twelve pages in three weeks is four a week. Here's the order I'd write them in so the first four move your 1.1% before the rest are drafted.
Why it worksTurns their brief into a plan they can picture.
A shopper likes the bottle, then stalls at 'will this refill fit what I have?' I'd write for that exact moment first.
Why it worksA small, concrete scene beats a list of skills.
When someone leaves a product page today, do you know whether it's price, the refill system, or the copy that loses them?
Why it worksA sharp question proves you've already started thinking.
Let me rewrite one page first. If it doesn't beat the current version in a two-week test, you don't owe me for the other eleven.
Why it worksRemoves the risk of saying yes to a stranger.
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Paste the brief
A job post, your offer, or a few lines about your service. Up to 4,000 characters.
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Take the one that fits
Copy it, tweak a word, send. Don’t love one? Regenerate just that angle.
Hi! I came across your job posting and I’m very interested. I have 5+ years of copywriting experience and I’m confident I’d be a great fit.
Could be sent to any client. Says nothing about theirs.
Twelve pages in three weeks is four a week. Here’s the order I’d write them in so the first four move your 1.1% before the rest are drafted.
Uses their numbers, shows a plan, earns the next sentence.
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